Wednesday, April 29, 2015

Holidays short story!

My eyes slowly start to adjust to the dark cold breeze of the night sky. As my feet slightly step into the murky brown water it sends a rush of shivers down my spine. I switch the button on my torch and hold it down in the cold water. I follow the bright light as it guides me through the low tide ocean. Little fish are zipping around my feet. They swarm around the light and they look like stunned possum's. The torch lights up my path all the way around the muddy lagoon whilst I look for flounder!

2 comments:

  1. I love the choice of words as it really builds a picture for me Hannah. Where were you?
    Mrs F

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